I dont agree with this.
I think it is a great post as it is,
and one must be extremely suspicious when one see this post and don`t believe that this is your work.

Both the text is good.
The way you let us see the work from the beginning to the end with many pictures is good.
And the way you build up the whole post is good. :)

I dont understand what more you could have done to make it better. :)