Lazy Days in Cambodia - Art Concepts

I've tried and retried this concept quite a few times and I think I finally got it! Woot! I just have to stop being so lazy and get to work on the flowers. It's been sitting in my sketchbook half finished like this for weeks and I've started a few other things as well. I will post the final version when I finally get around to finishing it. Tell me what you think! Thanks!