I like the new look you have hahahaha. The detail of the sheet in the backpack indicates the inspiration you had. There is something I do not like and I will tell you. I did not like the red or orange circle in the background because it clashes. Well, it's my appreciation ... don't worry.
A cordial greeting @valkangel
Thanks for the critique! For some reason I just like the red lol I'll keep it in mind in my future works!