Redraw of a commission i did on 2017

So this is Coco, my friend's OC. Whenever he commission's me its usually about her. This was done during 2017.
As an artist im always struggling to find my Artstyle and everyday im always experimenting on it. The picture on the bottom is the 2018 version of the commission. My friend told me he liked the first one better. But even then im still always challenging myself to draw more and try other techniques. Tell me what you think about the two pictures and which style you prefer. Also constructive criticism is very much welcomed!