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RE: "Ithaqa" Comic Book Update #131 An Update From Maine

in #art7 years ago

I like the desaturated palette. I am not sure why Theresa is changing the direction of the main girl here in the 2nd and 3rd panels. Maybe, there is an underlying reason that I don't understand but it seems like it loses the reader slightly. The last couple panels are juxtaposed well. Tell her, great job.

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I'm glad you like the pallette!

I believe panels 2 and 3 are like a shot reverse shot where the frame is looking at the rat (so close that we see Hazel) and then we flip the view around to actually see Hazel.

Theresa is great at conveying movement, I'll be sure to give her your regards!

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