You will need some mroe IMAGES for your writing!

and maybe flesh out your characters with sketches, i dunno, im glad your using steem to post your writings... we need more creative people on steem with their own scotbot tribes https://steempeak.com/tribes ... you could make a tribe for writing.. book club tribe.. easy.. you can even make one for french language etc

anyway good job! thansk for coming into https://steemspeak.com