AIR-CLINIC WRITING CONTEST: Dollars and sense

in #air-clinic7 years ago (edited)

Not long after the marriage ceremony, a young couple begin to realise that it takes more than love to maintain a home. The bride and the bridegroom had savings before marriage but were surprised to see how quickly these savings could dwindle as they attempted to meet the needs of their new home. The assumption that Harry's pay check would be enough was too optimistic. Harry was not promoted as fast as he had hoped and Mary, coming from a wealthy background envisaged that if the worse comes to worst, her parents would assist. She was yet to find out.

Money represents the material things which provide a homelike setting. The amount of money and the handling of this money determine the standard of living in a given home.

As time went on, Mary began to find it hard to get accustomed to this new standard of living which by comparison, smacks of poverty. She realised she needs new clothes, food stuffs in the kitchen, and there was the rent. The one question that haunted Harry day and night was, "Where will the money come from?".

Cooperation among them ceased, she feels insecure, he becomes discouraged. Not long after, his lack of concentration earns him a sack letter.

All hope is now lost!

Depression sets in following poverty. These two take turns to finally force the couple out of their home. Jobless and angry, they find shelter in a slum. What a drop!

Poor sanitation, Malnutrition and Malaria became the order of the day. Mary's parents refused to help because they warned her against marrying a man whose income was only a fraction of theirs. If only she and Harry gave their home and income proper planning, it wouldn't have collapsed.

Was it too late?

Truth is, there is nothing like "enough money" as long as human needs remain insatiable. Nobody ever has enough money.

Therefore, how to handle and control money is what limits its absence and presence of poverty and diseases.

That is to say, Money + sense = Good health, Money - sense = Poverty and diseases.

WORD COUNT: 350 words

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@scarletmedia wow. Money without sense is poverty(abject ooo), depression, diseases....nice write dear

Exactly! Thanks Doc. @afeezee

Money without sense = poverty

Reality... 😂 😂 😂

Lol...yeah 😂

Lol.. Nice

Money + sense = Good health, Money - sense = Poverty and diseases.

Lovely story dear.

Hahahaha money without sense is directly proportional to poverty

Yes oo my dear. We need to apply sense when dealing with money or end up poor. Thanks for reading

I think couples should talk about finances even before getting married, how will the rent be paid, food, utilities, medical and when kids come, how will they be supported etc there is alot, a wedding is a day's affair, marriage is a lifetime committment.

You are very correct. Couples should not just rush into marriage. Things like this should be carefully discussed and put in place. Thank you for reading...

Hmmm...true.
Very true.

Yeah...thanks!

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