RE: AIR-CLINIC APP UPDATE 7: Chat & Messenger, In-App Notifications, Smooth & Clean UI, Social Activities...
This appears to be a significant and impressive update to the app, and I am happy to see that. I do, however, have some issues with the post.
For starters, just isn't much information. For an update as massive as this one, I'd expect to see more details, more information, more everything. Particularlt, in an update announcing changes to the UI, I'd expect to see screenshots demonstrating the new, cleaner UI.
There are also issues of style and grammar. I'll cite some examples:
"You can chat up any other member of the Air-Clinic Social circle and interact the way you want to!" Did you mean to write "chat up," there? In many places, "chat up" means hit on. Make a pass at. As Air-Clinic is not a dating app, I'm pretty sure that's not what you meant.
The word "app" does not need to be capitalized.
"We have decided to adopt this saying" should be "the saying."
"Upvotes and AIRCOIN are the rewards too." I think you may be missing the word "here" between "rewards" and "too."
In a post as short as this one, issues such as these become more significant. I hope you take care to avoid similar problems in the future. I look forward to your next update.
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