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RE: On the Pepper Coast
Good feedback - I added some paragraph breaks to improve the readability. Criticism only helps!
Good feedback - I added some paragraph breaks to improve the readability. Criticism only helps!
Constructive Criticism only helps!
Ok, now I'm glad it was taken the right way!! I had noticed the difference in names before, but when you brother replied to me I missed it. Was rushing as usual...always doing more things at once then I should be.