@churchboy, I enjoyed your story but I did not enjoy the way you ended it and it makes me sad.

Agu should have atleast built a boat and sailed back to his mother and wife to be (Oge).

Beautiful story all the same and thanks for sharing it.

Between, I think you need to edit this sentence "Ochendo woke him from sleep the next morning and begged him to accept his father's land."

I think you meant to say Nwafor and not Ochendo.