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RE: ADSactly Story - The Checkpoint
LOL. Excellent and unexpected ending, just as good stories should be. I liked all that first part, how you described the policemen, so similar to all the policemen in the world; how you described Chuks, the dialogues. I felt identified with Chuks: at some point I have felt exposed to policemen who look like criminals and who are just trying to take advantage of themselves. If they had been good cops who really wanted to do their job, a car carrying dead bodies might be the most suspicious thing in the world. A joke: a policeman who kills, but is afraid of corpses. It's always good to read you, @greenrun. . Thanks for sharing and @adsactly for posting.
There is an African adage that says, "the executioner fears the man with the cutlass." So, that may be the case here. Thanks, once again, for your pretty comprehensive reply and review too. :)