hahahaha. I was already sensing the end, @greenrun, and you come out with that twist! From the first moment, the description you make of the character of Musa makes us feel rejected by him and then how each of the events occur, the reader is feeling that the character of Evans will be deceived. I think you did all the atmosphere for the reader to get involved in the exchange of cows, in the business and feel identified with the character of poor Evans. My grandmother used to say that there are people who are born to be silly, how is it that he is going to have this kind of dreams, for me it would be a nightmare. Hahahaha. This is the kind of story that readers appreciate, that is not predictable, that leaves the reader with a smile on his face. I liked it! Greetings