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RE: Can't a Man Drink a Half Stout in Peace?
Forgive me if I'm wrong, but this puts me in mind of Aesop's Fables, @greenrun.
Though I tried to think what the moral of the story was going to be, I became sad with the news that Auntie had been hospitalised.
Very well done! With a few lines, you made this reader care about the characters.
Good writing!
PS I upvoted this comment and as soon as you've seen it, I'll remove the upvote :)