Hello, @churchboy. I'm reading a story of yours for the first time. I appreciate a very well told story, which incorporates real life facts of unquestionable relevance, such as that of that fearsome disease that seriously affected their land, but also others that may be more common with other parties, such as the complicity between youth groups, the experience of noisy nightclubs and petty criminal acts that may take unwittingly malicious people like Ugos. A story handled with good realistic sense, excellent description and good dialogue. Thank you for your story. Greetings.