This reminds me that some eager developer should start up a 'best chapter' contest...Every week people who enjoy novels would read the posts in one central location, and upvote accordingly.

Judges would then select the best writing and reward with SP.

Typically, I don't read novels. But, I do enjoy real-life scenarios written in novel form. I think this is the case for your post.

Here's a tip! Perhaps, if you broke it up into paragraphs, it would make for easier reading.

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Peace.