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RE: SLC S23W2 : What Your Mood? A Thunkable App
Spelling and grammar issues:
Your documentation has spelling and grammar errors. So use a capital “I” and start sentences with capital letters to make them easier to read .
Language consistency:
Your application interface mixes Italian and English. Use one language consistently.
Project clarity:
- Your documentation states that this is both a personal and client project, which is a bit confusing, could you clarify whether it's for personal use, a client, or both?
You also mentioned earning money from ads while previously stating it was a client requirement.
I think you updated and removed the client mention ==> part where you say this project is for the client (I remember something like that).
- You claim that the project is 90% complete. But some key functionalities are still missing, it might be better to focus on finalizing core features before introducing new ones.
UI & DEV recommendations
- The first screen lacks clarity , it's not immediately clear what the buttons do, consider using more descriptive button name.
- on the second screen, the text looks crowded and poorly written, better paragraph structure & label placement would improve reading.
- Seeking additional feedback, especially on ui/ux design, could help improve the user experience.
It looks like a great idea, I'm excited to see the final result, also, I learned about a new tool, Thunkable , thanks for that.
My pleasure very soon i complete it.. my client will earn money from ad
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Thank yoy so much for your feedback i am not so expert i am also .learning from YouTube.... but on that way. I completed 100 of. Project when you go down in my YouTube channel you will find many videos about this plate from
I will complete and modify this project and then post in next week.. account to your suggestion