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RE: SLC S23W2 : What Your Mood? A Thunkable App

in #techclub2 days ago

Spelling and grammar issues:

Your documentation has spelling and grammar errors. So use a capital “I” and start sentences with capital letters to make them easier to read .

Language consistency:

Your application interface mixes Italian and English. Use one language consistently.

Project clarity:

  • Your documentation states that this is both a personal and client project, which is a bit confusing, could you clarify whether it's for personal use, a client, or both?
    You also mentioned earning money from ads while previously stating it was a client requirement.

I think you updated and removed the client mention ==> part where you say this project is for the client (I remember something like that).

  • You claim that the project is 90% complete. But some key functionalities are still missing, it might be better to focus on finalizing core features before introducing new ones.

UI & DEV recommendations

  • The first screen lacks clarity , it's not immediately clear what the buttons do, consider using more descriptive button name.
  • on the second screen, the text looks crowded and poorly written, better paragraph structure & label placement would improve reading.
  • Seeking additional feedback, especially on ui/ux design, could help improve the user experience.

It looks like a great idea, I'm excited to see the final result, also, I learned about a new tool, Thunkable , thanks for that.

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My pleasure very soon i complete it.. my client will earn money from ad
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Thank yoy so much for your feedback i am not so expert i am also .learning from YouTube.... but on that way. I completed 100 of. Project when you go down in my YouTube channel you will find many videos about this plate from

I will complete and modify this project and then post in next week.. account to your suggestion

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