Art Explained By A Writer: The Walk of Death (1896)

in ᴀʀᴛ & ᴀʀᴛɪꜱᴛꜱ27 days ago (edited)


3 AM
I sneak out of the house—it’s finally silent.

3:30 AM
The boat is like a goldsmith's shop, and your tea stinks, says the note on the riverbank. I look over my shoulder, is that message for me? Hard to imagine, unless it’s from that idiot pacing back and forth on the rocks. How much force would it take to push him? The scene would be interesting enough to film and post on YouTube or TikTok. It reminds me of an old commercial where a guy hangs off a cliff, and instead of helping, his girlfriend says, Hang on... and films him—something that’s a common thing to do these days. But it’s too dark, and I’m not quick enough to sneak up, scare the living daylights out of him by asking if the message is his, then dash downstairs to record it all.

4:01 am
There are empty bottles on the beach. I’m not sure if they’re the ones I threw into the water or leftovers from a drinking party. What if these were the answers I’d been waiting for? I step into the water while Devil stays on the shore. He isn’t interested in joining me.


What is that woman doing in the water? What does she see that I don’t? She’s picking something up—is it proof against me? Evidence from the day I asked her to get in the boat?




The sun shines through a crack between the closed shutters. I’ve found a way to break out of here. One more night of work, and I'll be gone.

I hear the waves crashing against the poles of the hut, built above the water. I smell the river and watch it splash through the cracks in the wooden floor. This is my only entertainment after years of confinement. I wonder if I can still swim. I barely remember the old man’s words: Pull in, close we, it's not difficult child. Relax and float like a plank on the water. The only thing I ever learned was treading water.

"Take the compass that always points to..." I have no idea where it leads, but as long as it’s the opposite direction from here, I must reach the other side. Whether it’s true, I don’t know, but Grandpa trusted that compass with his life and survived every hardship except the last time, when he shoved it into my hands and told me to run. To this day, I don’t know what I was running from. After an exhausting sprint, I’m still locked up here, and no one’s ever come to my aid.

When I close my eyes, I see a boy smiling at me. He looks familiar. Do I have a brother?

When I pry the plank loose and lower myself, a bottle taps against one of the poles. The sound is almost musical. I keep it as a talisman; if that bottle can float, so can I. There’s something inside. Later, I tell myself. Later, when I’m safe, I’ll see what it is. It’s the first gift I’ve received in all these years.

Planks drift within reach, and I cling to one, letting the current carry me, my face pressed against the wood and the bottle tucked under my shirt. It won’t be long before the moon burns at full strength.

A white gleam shimmers in the distance. Is it a beach? A desert? It doesn’t matter as long as it’s land.

"I am Death," she says. "Welcome. Give me your hand, and I’ll help you out. Did you pay the ferryman, or did you crawl through the hellhole into the well?"

I don’t know who she is, but her face is the kindest I’ve seen in years.

"Do you want an apple?" she asks. "Shake that tree when they’re ripe, it’s when they taste best. Don’t take one by force, or you’ll pay for it."

I nod, eyeing the tree swaying gently in the wind.

"How can you refuse an apple, child?" Mother Holle teases. I hesitate. Accepting apples from old women can be dangerous. I remember Grandpa’s fairy tales.

"Nonsense!" She laughs. "These are organic, bio+, and as long as you only take what you need and waste nothing, nature will care for you. Look at me, I’m at least 4,000 years old and still walking. "Trust me, you’re in good hands if you take the walk of Death. Now, where are you hiding with that driftwood? Aren’t you cold? I’ve made a fire. Come inside, but grab some firewood on your way in. I’ve baked apple pie and pancakes—unless you’re on a keto diet... You’re as skinny as Hansel and Gretel!"

She laughs, and I join her. She has Grandpa’s humor.

"I’d love to warm myself by the fire, thank you," I say politely, balancing firewood in one arm and clutching the bottle to my chest.

When the flames dance high, she serves the food. I eat warm apple pie with whipped cream, and she is right, the walk of Death isn't bad at all. She knows how to survive and take the best out of life. That night, it's the first time in long I sleep sound and safe.


2.4.25
@almaguer
Painter: Magnus Enckell
Painting: The Walk Of Death (1896) - public domain
Prompt: The compass that always points to your... by @freewritehouse
Art & Writing is hosted by @solperez
Original text: Dutch - translated

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(Accepting apples from old people is dangerous) maybe it's because of the apple or because they are old hahaha, some people look down on these people, I have even seen young people in line at some supermarkets observing the way they make their card transactions and their expression says, how slow, they forget that they will also grow old, older people are treasures that we must know how to value, they carry the passage of years and the teachings from which we can profit. Death is imminent and we must accept it, I always say, if you accept that you will die, you will live more peacefully

 25 days ago 

It is indeed strange how some, not all, are irritated when people around them are not as quick as they are. I already notice how elderly people apologise when the cashier piles up their groceries, crushes half of them and starts with the next customer before the groceries are packed. When they do that to me, I become extremely slow and I pay cash, so I count each coin twice and hold it up to the light to check the date and whether it is a euro, one from another country or a foreign currency, because I have all the time in the world and the cashier is paid by the hour and even though she holds up her hand, she chats with the other cashier without even looking at me.

So I nod at the elderly person in front of me and say, I have all the time in the world, take your time, there is plenty of time and there are self-pay cash registers for those who are in a hurry and only buy Mars and fast food because they never learnt to cook. Oh, did YOU forget to buy tea and biscuits.... let them wait, I'll get it for you and I'll walk into the shop at my leisure. Too bad then for those in a hurry,do your shopping when you have time and be glad you live in a world of luxury that you didn't build yourself with blood, sweat and tears.

Thanks for stopping by again dear friend, you are right we all will be old and if not old sick and not able to run again but is there a need to? Isn't life worth a slow walk, to be observed and enjoyed?

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