Bila Waktu Sudah Terhenti
Photo merupakan koleksi pribadi. Photo Putri semata wayangku yang sekarang sudah remaja
Dalam rahim seorang Ibu
waktu 9 bulan
dekapan lembut dengan meminum
Air Susu Ibu
butuh waktu 18 bulan
terus tertatih hingga menjadi
anak-anak yang lucu
remaja yang menawan
akhirnya menjadi dewasa
Titik dimana waktu
sangat terbatas
penuh perjuangan
penuh tanggung jawab
membawa cita menuju cinta
sampai batas
semua akhirnya terlepas
Bebas untuk pertama
merangkak kembali berdua
saling asah, asih dan asuh
bersama rasa kasih sayang
yang tidak berujung
sampai waktu terhenti
untukmu atau untukku
Berikut adalah terjemahan puisi ke dalam bahasa Inggris.
When Time Has Come to a Standstill
In a mother's womb, time stands still for 9 months, wrapped in gentle hugs, nourished by mother's milk. It takes 18 months to grow, stumbling forward, until becoming adorable children, captivating teenagers, and finally, adults.
At this point, time becomes scarce, filled with struggles, responsibilities, and pursuing dreams until they merge with love. Until everything ultimately comes undone.
Free to crawl again, side by side, sharpening, caring, and nurturing each other with boundless love and affection. Until time stands still, for you or for me.
Sahabatku
@aneukpineung78
@wakeupkitty
Saya memberikan penilaian untuk puisi Saya ini dengan nilai 10.
Karena membayangkan hari tua.
Saya atau pasangan saya yang duluan menghadap Allah.
I get the point and there's beauty in it but I miss something. It can be it's the translation.
Life in the womb doesn't stand still. The unborn grows very fast and hears everything.
18 months to grow?
In a way we might end where we started just without a caring person.
Terimakasih temanku #wakeupkitty.
memang pada dasarnya nanti kita akan kembali sendiri. Karena masa tua yang akan kita lalui bila ada umur panjang. kita tidak akan selalu bersama dengan pasangan kita dan orang-orang yang kita cintai.
Untuk 18 bulan yang saya maksudkan adalah masa bayi tersebut menyusui. Minum Air Susu Ibu.
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You are right, we start alone and we will die alone and the rest is the journey of life. The breastfeeding took longer with me but the average with us will have 6 months and at the age of 3 or 4 months they already start with fruit, next easy to digest vegetables, rice and chicken
Iya. Benar sekali. Selama 6 bulan ASI murni. Selanjutnya di tambah makanan bergizi. Namun untuk makanan bayi. 30 tahun yang lalu, bayi begitu baru lahir langsung di beri makan nasi dan pisang. Dan bayi tersebut tetap sehat sampai sekarang. Apakah di Negara tempat temanku @wakeupkitty zaman dulu anak yang baru lahir juga di beri nasi tampa harus menunggu 6 bulan?
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How were babies raised in the old days if there was no breastmilk or milk from another mom? They did with goat milk or cow milk and added rice, corn or flour to make it thicker and so the baby will sleep through the night and won't feel hungry and next the babies eat what we eat, we just make it smooth, that's all. Three-month-olds also have a piece of bread to soak on. LOL
As soon as they try with spoon next to breastfeeding we make porridge with riceflour because it's easy to digest.
(Lammetjespap was given when my mother and I were children, it's milk with flour.)
Now it's rice flour (Nutrix), and if the child is a toddler, they prepare it with wheat (Bambix,) and if older like 4 years and adults too, we have Brinta.
First fruits given are like applesauce or make or peaches and later bananas. I like that baby food too. :LOL
@almaguer here are tips for what the baby can eat. Or is he already super big?
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