One picture, one story | Loneliness
Maya came to the park after a long time, alone. She sat on the swing and leaned her head on the chain, catching it. The swing next to her was swinging slightly in the wind as it had in the last few months. This is her favorite spot where she spent hours with Lisa, her best friend, laughing and sharing secrets.
Sitting on the swing, Maya recalled the last time she had spent time with Lisa. Lisa revealed that her parents were going to another city to give her a better education. Maya's heart collapsed as she heard this news. How Lisa promised to speak whenever she could and how Lisa tried to set Maya's mind. All these are only hopes.
At first, Maya believed that Lisa would talk to her as promised, send her messages, or even come back to visit her. But, when the time passed, everything changed.
Maya felt a pain, that she could not explain. She has awaited a message from Lisa for more than two month.
Finally, she came to the park and sat on the swing, as if hoping for Lisa's arrival. But everything has changed deeply. Maya's memory ran to the past, reminding her of their lovely days spent together with laughter.
She looked around at other children playing, running, and talking. She took a deep breath. She deeply felt the loneliness, so she closed her eyes; she felt that Lisa was laughing in front of her.
Maya knew that she would never meet Lisa again, but she knew that she would get another friend soon. Until then, she let the wind carry her sadness.
She started to push the swing herself, remembering the lovely days she had spent with Lisa. Her eyes welled with tears; she let them flow without stopping. She took a deep breath, hoping for a better day and putting Lisa out of her mind.
A heart-wrenching and relatable story about the pain of losing a dear friend i must say your vivid descriptions and emotional depth brought Maya's sorrow to life this really a beautifully written and I'm sure many can resonate with her longing.
This is how writers captivate readers by giving the story an emotional connection. Sadness is always accompanied with loneliness. Thank you for reading and for your kind remarks.
He has presented a story involving great emotion.The number of friends of Lisa's character is increasing day by day.They never know how to value a true friend.This is how true relationships and love fade away in the face of self-interest.Reality really shines through in your story.
Thank you very much for reading and leaving such kind feedback.
¡Holaaa amiga!🤗
Tener un amigo, es como ganar el hermano que complementará nuestra vida y, perderlo ha de ser un dolor estruendoso al igual que, superarlo no es tan sencillo como creemos.
Excelente relato amiga... Nos invita a reflexionar sobre el valor de la amistad. Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica. Un fuerte abrazo💚
Thank you for your encouraging words.
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Thank you very much for the support. @solperez.