First of all, beautiful couplet.

Secondly, your poetry promotes the fragile strength of womanhood. And this I like.
Not that you just strengthened the female folk but because you, on behalf of all the women all over the world, admitted to your weaknesses and even more so, brought out the strength hidden in the fold of these weaknesses to the witnesses reading this poem.

Look, I tell you, this poem is bae. I read it and I imagined you on stage performing it.

Ever heard of spoken words? Jeez! I'm talking too much.
This is a very good poem.

From yours truly,
@godwine