Azarion
Its name is Azarion, the opposite of the other dragon. Legend has it, told by the great elders, when the God debates the balance between fire and ice, it was born from the conflict between electricity and eternal glaciers. As the chest of an Azarion dives, its blue fire can destroy, but it can also be good. It is a guardian, although the world sees it as a monster, it is also a great mystery.
One day, the nearby state was caught in the grip of dark forces, the all-consuming shadow heap. Neither sword nor magic could stop it, as the young, stern princes came to seek the dragon, even though the old man warned him of its unbelievable and dangerous existence.
Queil found Azarion atop a mountain in Landds in a storm. Facing the dragon, he felt the burden of fear close in on him, but he pleaded for help. Allyoon didn't respond with his shining eyes, but the dragon could sense the governor's honesty and pain, and a weakness of balance that always protected him.
Until finally, Azarion spread his wings and accepted the prince's request with a roar that sent the valley floor tumbling. When the shadow reached the gate of the fort, the brilliance of the blue star illuminated the sky with lights of blue fire, ending the darkness that was lost.
From that day on, the unpleasantness was not only the story of fear, but also the expectation of the worst powers. Although the dragon returned to his valley in the clouds, his story is written in their hearts that are telling it, the elders carry his legacy as written on the scroll of mystical life.
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Dear,
You write very beautifully, you know how to handle plot and narrate. Which is hard to achieve. You use some very poetic imagery (at times).
Two points to try. This is just my modest opinion.
First.
The sentence.
It takes me out of the plot, you already have my attention. This is a break that removes narrative time. It adds nothing to me. It baffles me and, although great writers have used it. In this century, personally, it is dissonant.
Second.
Be careful what poetic phrases you use. Narrative doesn't lend itself so much to poetics. Narrative is the crumbs you leave along the way for the reader. Find, recreate or imagine what you want to tell. Everything else tends to mislead.
I repeat, you write very well. We don't necessarily have the same style. But as a reader, I have a criteria to share.
Keep writing you always learn.
#wewrite #comment
Thank you for your comment and well, I will take it into account. That's what we're here for and, as you said, everyone has their own way of creating their literature.