Jamie The Farmer

in #poetry6 years ago

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I mentioned in my introduction that I was a member of the Society for Creative Anachronism (SCA), for many years, where among other things, I was a Bard. A Bard is an entertainer, a storyteller, poet, or singer. I was all of those, though mostly I thought of myself as a poet.

I don't post many of my poems here because they were targeted to that particular sub-culture, and many of them probably will not resonate outside that sub-culture. But some, I think, may appeal to a wider audience.

This is one of my most successful poems. By successful I mean that it really seemed to strike an emotional chord with with a lot of people. This is one of the few things that I have written that get performed by other Bards, particularly children. This always seemed odd to me because the subject matter does not seem like it should appeal to children. but it does.

Jamie The Farmer



Jamie was a fine young lad,
Who longed to be a Knight.
And many's the night he dreamed that he,
Was clad in armor bright.

He yearned to rescue maidens fair.
To strike down evil men.
To see the ladies safely home,
Then do it all again.

But day by day he'd seek to wrest,
A living from the soil.
His nights filled up with empty dreams,
His days with sweat and toil.

And in his heart he knew that it
Was never meant to be.
Great deeds were not accomplished by
A farmer such as he.

While walking home from church one day
He came upon a lass.
He found her weeping all alone,
Lying on the grass.

"You should not be here all alone.
The weather's very cold.
My Lady would you share my cloak?
It's warm though patched and old.

He took her home and fed her well,
And gave her warm Wassail.
To thank him for his kindness she
Began to tell her tale.

"My father is a noble lord.
A lord of high degree.
But I did love a servant lad.
And loved him tenderly.

"Many nights I spent with him.
And now I am with child.
When my father learned of this
His deeds were cruel and wild.

"Quickly he sent for my love
And there before my eyes,
He struck his head from off his neck
All heedless of my cries.

"And then he took me far from home
And left me there to die.
I wandered lost all through the night
Until you happened by.

"The one I love lies in the ground.
My own life I would take.
Though I would die yet I must live.
All for his baby's sake.

"Now I'll be a servant lass,
To scrub and sweep and bake.
For I must have a place to live.
All for his baby's sake.

And hearing this, up Jamie spoke
And said "Please be my Wife."
I will keep you warm and fed
And defend you with my life."

"My heart lies buried in the ground
A poor wife I would make.
But I will stay and be thy bride,
All for the baby's sake."

Twelve hard years have come and gone.
They are together still.
Their oldest son helps work the land,
His hand firm on the till.

They have two daughters and two sons
And another on the way.
Jamie lives a happy life,
And thanks the Lord each day.

And in his dreams he does not wear
A sword and armor bright.
But he wears that shining armor still
In her dreams every night.

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I must say you wrote a very nice post @xcountytravelers.

You may don't know me. I am friend of @crypto.piotr & I decided to support all who got delegation from him. Wish you great success here my friend.

Thank you. We appreciate it.

Scott

Hi guys, @flash07, @xcountytravelers

you're both very supportive. I hope you will help me make our little community stronger in 2019 :)

Yours
Piotr

Love it Love it Love it!
Does that make me a child? :p lol
Seriously, a story--A very good story with a moral message--in the shape of a poem, that rhymes! Is that even possible?

Yeah he amazes me for sure!
Ren

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Hi @xcountytravelers

I hope you don't mind my little off-topic comment.

Most of all I wanted to thank you for being part of my little quest. Engagement we managed to create within our community was quite impressive. I hope some of those new friendships and connections will last longer.

I finally had a chance to check how many people completed my previous small quests and again reality exceeded my expectations.

I counted already 20 people who joined our little venture. I LOVE IT!

But I've small problem here. Again I didn't anticipate such a support and I don't have enough of SP at the moment to delegate some extra to everyone. Would it be okey if instead of delegating extra 20SP I would extend time of current delegation for another one month? Until end of March 2019?

Let me know if it would be okey.

ps. Im also planning to purchase more STEEM after new year. So if in the future you will struggle with low RC limit then give me a shout and I will see what I can do at that particular moment to help you :)

Cheers
Piotr

First of all, don't worry about the extra delegation for us. We are doing well. If there is someone else in the group that could use more, please pass it to them.

Secondly, I am slowing working on the list for the second part of the challenge. I really enjoyed meeting those that were in the first challenge. I've been a bit busy helping my parents move so everything is backed up for me. Today is definitely a catch-up day. I'm thinking of putting something on in the instapot and plowing deep into it all! haha.

Lastly, I really appreciate all that you have done. You have stepped out of your comfort zone and helped a lot of people with their RC and getting to meet people. Because of your help, I have been able to reach more new introductions. This is a huge thing we appreciate it so much.

So, thank you. You are an inspiration.
Ren

Thank you for your kind reply and understanding @xcountytravelers

Lastly, I really appreciate all that you have done.

Meeting people like yourself and @shadowspub is my biggest reward for all the effort that I put into my actions :)

All the best Ren
Piotr

I am trying to enjoy the poetry, and I hope some more will see by bringing it into community attention @xcountrytravelers.

Thank you. I will be posting some from time to time.

Scott

Aww I love this, great poem! Heart touching. I can see kids being into this as well, although I know what you mean about it not being obviously kids material

It was always strange hearing the kids do this poem.
Ren


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Thank you so very much!

That is brilliant! What a delightful tale. I'm quite impressed!

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@xcountytravelers WOW! 🌸💮🌸
Thanks for sharing. It's indeed rare but I appreciate such poems 😊😊 used to write a few in my schooling days XD

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