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"Thinning Light"
Feeling lost when the light thinned
Left without a choice you followed a small ray
Only to find yourself drenched in sins
When you saw the world is about to rend
You feel your heart is starting to sway
Feeling lost when the light thinned
Feeling dizzy as the Earth spins
You thought there's only one way
As such you find yourself drenched in sins
To your worldly desires will you bend?
To the path of light will you stray away?
Feeling lost when the light thinned
The world is sinking, will you follow thr trend?
Do you have the heart not to be lead astray?
Is there hope even if you're drenched in sins?
How will you escape once light and darkness blends?
Life's quagmire will not allow you to play
Are you feeling lost when the light thinned?
What will you do if you're drenched in sins?
What is a Villanelle?
A villanelle (also known as villanesque) is a nineteen-line poetic form consisting of five tercets followed by a quatrain. There are two refrains and two repeating rhymes, with the first and third line of the first tercet repeated alternately until the last stanza, which includes both repeated lines. The villanelle is an example of a fixed verse form. The word derives from Latin, then Italian, and is related to the initial subject of the form being the pastoral.
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