PostsCommentsPayoutstheverve (41)in #poetry • 6 years agoRE: SACRED PLACES {An Original poetry} Day 81This is nice, though the language is a bit difficult. A person reading just for pleasure might stop on the way.…theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Day Poetry Challenge Day 79 "New Slaves"This is cool, the language is simple and easy and communicates a message clearly, without mincing words. Great job.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Day Poetry Challenge Day 81 "Stunt On The Haters"This is nice. It is confident and self-assuring without being mouthy and showing off.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #68Thank you @acousticsteveotheverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #74Thank you so much too. I'm happy it helped.theverve (41)in #steemitpoetrychallenge • 6 years agoRE: Speaking My Truth-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Seventy FourI love this! It's witty and beautifully crafted, self-confident without being conceited.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #68Thank you for your honest opinion. I appreciate it. I've always thought home is not a specific place. Home is created wherever one wants it.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: The Smell of You - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #67Thank youtheverve (41)in #poetry • 6 years agoRE: Day 66 - Thicker Than WaterGood poem. The rhyme is is good and kind of different. I wonder at your fondness for long lines of poetrytheverve (41)in #poetry • 6 years agoRE: Day 67 - Nature, NurtureY'know, whenever most people write about nature, it's mostly descriptive. Your writing is different. Sure, it's…theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #60😂😂.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #66I'm glad you related to the poem. There's sth freeing about being away from the fluorescence of artificial lighting…theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: I Am-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Sixty FiveThe rhythm of the poem is beautiful. And the persona's voice is strong. It encourages the reader to be too.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: My Powerful Lesson-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Fifty EightI like the open honesty in this poem. It's beautiful and strengthening, in a funny sort of way. I feel as if the…theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Our Own Masters-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Fifty ThreeI could actually feel movement from the poem because of how its shaped. I don't know if that was intended but it's certainly a good effect.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Ink Up - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #48Well, it is. Awesome actually.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Untitled - 100 Days of Poetry Day #40Well, I'm still searching for my answer.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: A Gentleman's Anger - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #2Thank you. When I was through writing it, I felt like a little child watching something he couldn't control. I think…theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Fluid - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #8Thank you for taking the time to read.theverve (41)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Her - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #9Thank you. I wasn't quite sure I nailed it but I feel much better about it now.